Wednesday, May 4

Collected Haiku #22

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suffering smolders
a slightest memory breeze
forest reignites

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pilgrim asks prophet
"where is heaven? where is hell?"
seer raises mirror

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what rhymes with orange?
as I sip chamomile tea
at least hat matches

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these digital words
travel amongst gracious souls
shall they fall astray?

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shanghai in our dreams
an exotic reverie
chinese restaurant

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invisibility
my super power, watch this
you can't see me now

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if I am speechless
it's not reserved apathy
my words deficient

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autonomy sings
a robin outside our cage
harmonious mind

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a flood dissipates
river returns to normal
wreckage of poems

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6 comments:

  1. Collected? From others, or are they your own?

    I have a haiku blog, if you're interested:
    Haiku Koo-Koo

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  2. Everything on this blog is stuff I've written. "Collected" as in I write a bunch then post them all at once.

    I'll check out your blog! :D

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  3. Oh, these are Wonderful!!

    everyone has a certain spin, and they are all haiku....many grabbed me as classically inspired.

    The one rhyming with orange made me laugh. I remember that M&M commercial and it was sooooo funny.

    "Nothing rhymes with orange." LOL!

    Very, very good, these are a pleasure to read.

    You also constrained yourself to the 5-7-5 form. That's good because we can go a bit wild later (Basho did...) but we need the discipline of the formal form.

    Just my opinion.

    Lady Nyo....who loves haiku, but thinks yours are better.

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  4. I love these. I'm a haiku fan, and you've created some magic here. My favorite is the pilgrim and the prophet. Well done.

    Thank you for stopping by my place. I appreciate it.

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