Great contrast in your projection, "surge in narrow rivulets / fractal across wasted land" and it's followed up by "waves of stones" —a current running throughout where one expects not to find one.
nice...from sand to a boulder...in him you see his home and i think that may be the highest compliment...
The sand, the boulder -- the rivulet and the waves - this flows like the sea, or the desert. Well done.
first you create such a wind-swept feeling with the sand...and then it all gets firm an touchable with the boulder..enjoyed this matt
Good, interesting piece; particularly like the end-line.