tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post4584877565759112711..comments2023-07-30T06:57:56.280-07:00Comments on CHUCK A MONKEY: Collected Haiku #22Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15515148975353849650noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-54852230842421544952011-05-04T19:41:55.719-07:002011-05-04T19:41:55.719-07:00I love these. I'm a haiku fan, and you've ...I love these. I'm a haiku fan, and you've created some magic here. My favorite is the pilgrim and the prophet. Well done.<br /><br />Thank you for stopping by my place. I appreciate it.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-23350203924426399492011-05-04T13:01:38.132-07:002011-05-04T13:01:38.132-07:00Oh, these are Wonderful!!
everyone has a certain ...Oh, these are Wonderful!!<br /><br />everyone has a certain spin, and they are all haiku....many grabbed me as classically inspired.<br /><br />The one rhyming with orange made me laugh. I remember that M&M commercial and it was sooooo funny.<br /><br />"Nothing rhymes with orange." LOL!<br /><br />Very, very good, these are a pleasure to read.<br /><br />You also constrained yourself to the 5-7-5 form. That's good because we can go a bit wild later (Basho did...) but we need the discipline of the formal form.<br /><br />Just my opinion.<br /><br />Lady Nyo....who loves haiku, but thinks yours are better.Asobimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15661326504398833746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-67748677753270962632011-05-04T10:42:01.130-07:002011-05-04T10:42:01.130-07:00Nice - you got style MC!Nice - you got style MC!Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-48134301646192939672011-05-04T07:25:00.102-07:002011-05-04T07:25:00.102-07:00Everything on this blog is stuff I've written....Everything on this blog is stuff I've written. "Collected" as in I write a bunch then post them all at once.<br /><br />I'll check out your blog! :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15515148975353849650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-28208278234444531322011-05-04T07:14:19.614-07:002011-05-04T07:14:19.614-07:00Collected? From others, or are they your own?
I ...Collected? From others, or are they your own?<br /><br />I have a haiku blog, if you're interested:<br /><a href="http://haiku-koo-koo.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Haiku Koo-Koo</a>Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.com