Thursday, May 26

I Live In Stars

I live in stars
with the plasma
people we party party
party party day indeterminate
day radioactive action retains
energy flares fell in love with a
shimmer girl with nuclear eyes
we raced with fireballs we
danced with electrons
smashed from
protons



                                                 till
                             I rocketed into
cold cold space where plasma
                             people will not
                                                 go


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 Written for G-man's Friday Flash 55.
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6 comments:

  1. James RainsfordMay 27, 2011 at 5:10 AM

    Intriguing and tightly constructed. I love the image of "a shimmer girl with nuclear eyes"

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  2. moondustwriterMay 27, 2011 at 10:44 AM

    Like the way you constructed this. Its like the atomic formation of a 55

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  3. Brian MillerMay 27, 2011 at 11:04 AM

    ha...this is awesome...love the concrete and the fab imagery...shimmer girl with nuclear eyes...excellent...

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  4. AnonymousMay 27, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    I'm loving the shimmer girl as well. Interesting words and visual.

    Here's mine: Friday Flash 55 ~ Doing Time

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  5. G-ManMay 27, 2011 at 2:16 PM

    Yeah Brother...
    I'm in another Galaxy myself.
    Excellent 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End!

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  6. Monkey ManMay 27, 2011 at 2:26 PM

    Quite a colorfully portrayed visual you've created.

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