Monday, May 2

You Will Know Me

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You will know me when my face is as night:
determined depths of patient space combined
with endless eyes of radiant starfall
atmospheres pierced with my passion's fury

you will know me by my fervent body:
limbs propelled by virtue of creative
fission; no nuclear reactor here--
a zeal extractor generates my suns

you will know me as my mind conflagrates
escapes its metaphysical prison
crosses the ageless void, light years journeyed
so you might see my luminosity

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7 comments:

  1. This flows..I love the last line-lovely.

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  2. I like the first stanza especially...
    '...endless eyes of radiant starfall
    atmospheres pierced with my passion's fury'
    Lovely.

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  3. Truly beautiful.
    I love the flow and found it uplifting.

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  4. I think I know you.. :)
    Nice write.

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  5. Ah, a companion piece at least to my weary sun... I loved your comment on my blog :)

    This is filled with stupendous images and a glorious choice of words.

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  6. Way kool. A sharp piece with a soft underbelly. Big words too, good thing I read some. Great job. Refreshing.

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