Thursday, June 6

meek poor crowds sake of /
shall comforted under god /
opened blessed heart

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Words from the Bible.  Written for dVerse Poets Pub.

8 comments:

  1. ha. i can get sense out of this one. smiles...comfort they shall find in their meekness
    or at least the opened hearts...smiles.

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  2. Biblical haiku, using the DADA message. A new form of Christian poetry? As a believer, I see no sacrilege In this. Excellent use of the Method and text.

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  3. ...really nice produce... i appreciate the attempt to make sense... coz you did make something special out of it... smiles...

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  4. Sweet. I really enjoyed this. Dada haiku are heavenly combinations. -Mike

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  5. I nice combination with a message..

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