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Prophets, why is wisdom in vast spaces:
trackless deserts, measureless horizons
bottomless oceans, countless bookcases
infinite systems with infinite suns?
illumination of youthful wonder
outshines the dimmest experiences
an affection that's transparently pure
fool's paradise in a wasteland's caress
what limits an omnipresent embrace
except a narrow minded reckoning?
no matter the place, a tolerant grace
receives ubiquitous understanding
a seeker need not venture somewhere else,
pursuit of insight inside conscious self.
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Written for One Stop Poetry. Happy Birthday OSP!
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nice...after the first stanza i was wondering where you were going the second is really good...and yes, you dont have to wander far...smiles
ReplyDeleteThe deepest journeys are within. You say that well !
ReplyDeleteThe journey within is the most important.
ReplyDeleteI just fell in love with this piece! A beautiful composition and tempo, your rhyme harmonious and such a powerful message. We don't need to suffer our forty days in the desert, yet simply speak to ourselves honestly wherever we stand. My favorite this week! ~ Rose
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written - this is wonderful. I love the second stanza, and you really hit it home with the closer.
ReplyDeleteso true its just a willingness to venture and be open (minded)
ReplyDeleteThanks Matt for your weekly support of OSP ( and me)
Smiles