tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post8311465601156030906..comments2023-07-30T06:57:56.280-07:00Comments on CHUCK A MONKEY: Mister MacAllisterAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15515148975353849650noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-1024581946066165222011-04-30T04:38:35.361-07:002011-04-30T04:38:35.361-07:00Matt, It works ...leave it be! Unfortunate, wretch...Matt, It works ...leave it be! Unfortunate, wretched soul he is...Great write.<br /><br />Thank you for taking the time to visit~<br />♥ ஆεlεɳa ~.^Helena Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03022290127423654311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-40861456474608813942011-04-29T21:42:53.105-07:002011-04-29T21:42:53.105-07:00@liv2write2day--
I made it up.
@everyone else--
...@liv2write2day--<br /><br />I made it up.<br /><br />@everyone else--<br /><br />Thank you for the compliments, I really appreciate it! :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15515148975353849650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-50195911443929195722011-04-29T19:52:44.966-07:002011-04-29T19:52:44.966-07:00I like it the way it is--the details like "to...I like it the way it is--the details like "too many teeth" are effective. Dark and tragic story. I think I read about this execution recently, right?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-63967324664184878382011-04-29T18:44:49.087-07:002011-04-29T18:44:49.087-07:00Matt....
THIS WAS FANTASTIC!!!
You nailed the very...Matt....<br />THIS WAS FANTASTIC!!!<br />You nailed the very essence of the Flash Fiction 55.<br />Please join us again.<br />Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-EndG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-12944927539026558492011-04-29T16:45:36.985-07:002011-04-29T16:45:36.985-07:00Well done!Well done!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-77368425133571104202011-04-29T16:38:59.688-07:002011-04-29T16:38:59.688-07:00Excellent, perfect.Excellent, perfect.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-1689742670766531192011-04-29T16:34:47.997-07:002011-04-29T16:34:47.997-07:00Shanae- "Why too many teeth?"
Was think...Shanae- "Why too many teeth?"<br /><br />Was thinking multiple explanations there:<br /><br />A) Giant grins on the kids. (Picture perfect family.)<br />B) Too many teeth to clean. (Shows his familial responsibilities.)<br />C) Play on the cliche "Too many mouths to feed"<br />D) It's just a visceral image, as if his kids are little carrion creatures that he has to support.<br /><br />If it doesn't work, I'm open to changing it, but for now, I dig it.<br /><br />:DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15515148975353849650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-47051868943231630012011-04-29T16:05:25.373-07:002011-04-29T16:05:25.373-07:00And here I am wanting to know his back story. Exc...And here I am wanting to know his back story. Excellent 55!Belindahttp://thehalfwaypoint.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-50430170379391801722011-04-29T14:32:43.143-07:002011-04-29T14:32:43.143-07:00Great poem...Why too many teeth?Great poem...Why too many teeth?Shanae Branhamhttp://www.disemblance.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-5370784389549414762011-04-29T13:49:52.271-07:002011-04-29T13:49:52.271-07:00Brilliant stuff. It gripped me and held me. The ...Brilliant stuff. It gripped me and held me. The building of pressure, the one wrong move and then boom!Pennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-2286316058656685402011-04-29T13:02:16.733-07:002011-04-29T13:02:16.733-07:00vicious write...i really enjoyed this...well as mu...vicious write...i really enjoyed this...well as much as you can the textures of a train wreck of a life...well told...and i wonder how many we have out there ready to explode...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8161410402277436683.post-121972269130178292011-04-29T10:25:51.455-07:002011-04-29T10:25:51.455-07:00Excellent. You've put a whole nasty, detailed,...Excellent. You've put a whole nasty, detailed, pointless and very illuminating life in here. I'm not watching the explosion, though.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com